In "Going for the Look, but Risking Discrimination," by Steven Greenhouse, he states that companies are "skirting the edges of anti-discrimination laws." The author means that companies are close to breaking the laws of anti-discrimination. On one hand, upscale companies are hiring employees that fit their company's image, but on the other hand, it is unfavorable to the skilled workers that want the job and don't portray the image. For example, at an upscale company, Abercrombie and Fitch, the employees must offer a job to anyone who fits the "classic American look," even if they don't have skills in retail.

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anecdote is a great way to start of your argument it could help you make your point.

 today in class mr. hamilton gave us a great example of parallel sentences he told us that the sentences start of with the same words. for example, she is hot, she is smart, she is evil.